Request Last video Review

[MariamPMusic]

Hey!
I just upload my last video and I want to know what do you think about it!
How can I do it better?
Thank u!

 

[dakota meyers]

first off nice thumbnail and u added a good amount of distractions it kept engaged the only thing I would tell you to change is when ur talking on the phone I would shorten it down a few seconds but overall a very good planned out video

 

[Jonathan]

I really liked the moral of the video its nice, simple and effective. I can relate to it far too well. Loved the simplicity of the thumbnail too, keep it up.​