Looking for feedback on my new thumbnail design

[DaRyanVox]

Hello Freedom family!

I am looking for feedback on my new style of thumbnail design. I have used some inspiration from a few YouTube creators to create my thumbnail design. I am just wondering, could I do anything to improve it? Will it catch people's attention? Should I change some things?

Thanks!
Ryan.

 

[TwilightPrinze]

Hello Freedom family!

I am looking for feedback on my new style of thumbnail design. I have used some inspiration from a few YouTube creators to create my thumbnail design. I am just wondering, could I do anything to improve it? Will it catch people's attention? Should I change some things?

Thanks!
Ryan.

I like the character design and Text style you used. What i do see though is that in the blurred background i can see 2 names of players?

 

[DaRyanVox]

I like the character design and Text style you used. What i do see though is that in the blurred background i can see 2 names of players?

Cheers! Yeah, that's the players that are alive. It was me and one other guy.

 

[TwilightPrinze]

Cheers! Yeah, that's the players that are alive. It was me and one other guy.

I'm not an expert in what way this will affect the thumbnail itself as it think on youtube it won't meet the eye soon. But if we set that aside and look at the upfront thumbnail then i would say you did a fine job on it

 

[DaRyanVox]

I'm not an expert in what way this will affect the thumbnail itself as it think on youtube it won't meet the eye soon. But if we set that aside and look at the upfront thumbnail then i would say you did a fine job on it

If I understand what you're saying, the leaderboard isn't actually suppose to be visible, it was just in the screenshot.

 

[Perrie McGuire]

Looks great, I would lift the minecraft character up just slightly so that the text is a little more readable.

Apart from that it is really good quality and explains everything that a thumbnail stands for.

 

[DaRyanVox]

Looks great, I would lift the minecraft character up just slightly so that the text is a little more readable.

Apart from that it is really good quality and explains everything that a thumbnail stands for.

Thanks! I was using the character's hands covering the text a bit as an effect but every feedback counts!

 

[TheGaminCentral]

The text looks good I see u used that character render from C4D so that's cool and blurry background is perfect there is no issue whether the player name is slightly visible because the thumbnail will be short....doesn't say much what can be shown in that particular video but still is a very good thumbnail