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Styli - I Told You

https://soundcloud.com/user-517605463/styli-i-told-you

[intro]
Hell no, I told you
yeah I told you
woowawow
oh I told you
yeah I told you
woowawow

[Verse 1]
I told you lots of thing,
it went through one ear,
out the other,
now your acting different,
acting strange,
almost like your undercover,
acting strange,
you've seemed to change,
you seem to be frustrated,
almost like your tryin to take a shot,
but your targets out of range,
woah,
I don't really know,
but every time I get tied up,
you just rise up,
and seem to ruin my show,
it's a back and forth emotion,
but I'm hopin' you can let it go,
because I'm tellin' you
I will make it as a rapper,
and the world is gonna know,
gonna know what I can offer,
it's time to let your ears prosper,
it's time to make a rainy day as happy as sunny one,
you may think I'm gonna fail,
but I am never gonna quit,
until the deed is done

[Hook]
O, I told you
That I don't give secon chances

Yeah, I told you
So now you can't take it back

Hell no, I told you
I told you
I told you
I told you

[Verse 2]
Yeah,
Now considering I've come so far already,
making fire lines and rhymes,
and all is going steady,
all is going well,
ain't that swell
and I can not imagine getting big from here is as difficult as people make it out to be,
undoubtably,
with out a doubt,
I'll make it out,
with all these raps coming outta me
and with all these bars,
I'm shooting for the stars,
aiming high,
because,
what's the point of aiming low?
just take chance and aim up for your dreams,
ignore the people that put you down,
and maybe you can go,
yeah,
an maybe you can live the life you wanna live,
it's just ashame you gotta take little,
before you got enough to give,
because the game of life ain't always nice,
and that's just how it is,
and I told you!

[Hook]
O, I told you
That I don't give secon chances

Yeah, I told you
So now you can't take it back

Hell no, I told you
I told you
I told you
I told you