Review4Review New To Commentary, Any Tips On How To Improve Would Be Appreciated :)

[Redhead_Games]

this is my first attemo at a commentary (of this type [storytime])
please give me tips on how to get better and how to come up with more story ideas (this one happened at school)
there will be a video review in return
anyway here is the video

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[Goped Fred]

A couple things off the start, content only belongs in the content section of the forum, so try not to post videos on regular threads. Also, I'd suggest NEVER to ask anyone to subscribe to you out of your video/video description. It generally brings you the wrong kind of attention. As for commentary, just talk like you'd be talking to a friend. The best thing to do is to not even aknowlege the mic at all. The more commentaries you do, the more comfortable you'll be. As for your stories, just talk about anything you find interesting. The best stories usually come from everyday encounters!