Gaming New video! Help?

[The Leaping Legion]

Hello family! I was wondering if you could provide me with some feedback for my new video?
Im looking for your opinion in my editing, music, and content in general, please!
Also, does anyone know how i can start cutting down my video time? Im looking to start getting them around 15 minutes, not 30. Thank you!!

Here it is:

If you want to, im taking feedback on the hannel as well, any advice is apriciated!

Thank you again!

 

[cebmofroz]

the only problem i see is that it is a 30 min video! try to keep your videos around the 5min mark! it is hard for the average person to find time to watch a whole 30 min video

 

[ReesFitz92]

Cutting down the time to 15 minutes max is a good idea