Request What do you think of my editing & my voice ?

[Astinax]

Hey guys !
I just posted a video and I was looking back on it and I was wondering if my voice & intonation wasn't too excessive. Also, I'm trying something new with editing, I'm trying to cut out the hesitations when I talk, and the less interesting parts, and I don't really know if it affects the continuity of the video. Anyways, thank you guys so much for checking out this thread !
- Astinax

 

[fattmat]

Hey guys !
I just posted a video and I was looking back on it and I was wondering if my voice & intonation wasn't too excessive. Also, I'm trying something new with editing, I'm trying to cut out the hesitations when I talk, and the less interesting parts, and I don't really know if it affects the continuity of the video. Anyways, thank you guys so much for checking out this thread !
- Astinax

You did seem to rush out the words at the beginning, but you were excited to make the video When you're working with a younger audience, they could enjoy this sort of content, you have a lot of leeway.

 

[Astinax]

You did seem to rush out the words at the beginning, but you were excited to make the video When you're working with a younger audience, they could enjoy this sort of content, you have a lot of leeway.

Thank you for your opinion!! and yeah x) I'll try and be more clear and not get overexcited and go too fast

 

[fattmat]

Thank you for your opinion!! and yeah x) I'll try and be more clear and not get overexcited and go too fast

No worries, we all have stuff to work on randomly ^^ If you need help in the future, let us know!

 

[Astinax]

No worries, we all have stuff to work on randomly ^^ If you need help in the future, let us know!

Thank you !